Monday, January 25, 2010

Why Why Why? (aka Motivation)

Over the holidays I had the great misfortune opportunity to go see a local production of A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens. It is a wonderful play (based on a wonderful novel) and hundreds if not thousands of theatres produce it every year at Christmas time.

One of the best things about this play (besides all the fun Christmas, family, moral lessony stuff) is that it is, at its heart, a truly simple play. It is not about thirty different things, as most Shakespeare, Williams, and Classical Greek plays are. It is a play about one thing: a man so greedy for gold he neglects all other areas of his life. This greed dictates his every decision, his every interaction with others. And, as we see in the play, it has left him very empty and very alone.

Why is he like this? What is his motivation? That is the sort of choice that a director (or an author) must make for themselves. If this were my book, then it would be because Scrooge is basically a small, weak man who makes himself powerful through the control of money. In a period of history in which the disparity between rich and poor spread, in which the rise of machines and factories and industrialization brought into question the value of a single human being, he has made himself valuable.


Uploaded to Flickr by Sean Fanning Designs

Alas, this was not the case in the production I saw this winter. Besides several (almost) forgivable production choices (like the four-poster bed pushed up against the window--kind of defeats the purpose of bed curtains--and the fact that every character wore pristine white gloves, stockings and mop caps--in what was arguably the filthiest, grimiest time in British history (see above)--and the creepy puppet people playing the three ghosts) there was one decision that ruined the entire production.
The man cast as Scrooge was fat.
What?!? Why? What is the possible justification for this choice? Ebeneezer Scrooge has an ironfast grip on his gold. He owns a giant mansion, but uses only one room to save on heat and servant costs. He is wealthy beyond measure, but pays his one employee a pittance, works himself 364 days a year, and spits on anyone asking for a bit a charity. In what possible universe can we imagine this man, who would rather shiver in an unheated room in winter than pay for the extra coal, would ever consume any more food than was absolutely necessary to keep him alive? Scrooge is not a glutton. He would not dare waste the coin on the superfluous food.

No, this was not the only problem with this production--nor was it the only reason we left the show at intermission--but it is a most unforgivable choice because it went entirely against Scrooge's character. Whatever motivation the director chooses as the source of his greed, how can you possibly justify a gluttonous Scrooge?

Choosing your character's motivation is a critical part of writing, it is the reason they do everything that they do in your book, and is inextricably tied to their goals. In Oh. My. Gods. Phoebe's main goal is to make the cross-country team at her new school and get decent grades. Why is this her goal? What is her motivation? She wants the running scholarship promised to her by the USC coach if she meets these goals. Having a fat Scrooge is as inconceivable as Phoebe saying, "I'm not going to practice today. I just don't feel like it."

When a character does something completely against their motivation, that's when people throw books across the room. Or when they walk out of productions at intermission. In other words, just don't.

Hugs,
TLC

Wednesday, January 20, 2010

But This Time It's Different

There comes a time in the writing of every book where I have some variant of the following conversation with either my parents or my best friend:

Me: I'm really worried about this book. I think it has some major flaws.
Them: You say that every time. It always works out.
Me: I know, but this time it's different. This time I'm really worried.
Them: You say that every time, too.
Me: I know. But this time it's really different.

And, guess what? They're right. I do say that every time, I do feel that way every time, and every time it actually does work out.

I'm not sure why this is part of the process (and I don't think I'm alone in this) but I do think it's essential. Without it, without worrying whether the writing is there this time, the writing is sure to fail. The fear keeps us striving for that unattainable perfection. It's the Les Brown quote:
Shoot for the moon and if you miss you will still be among the stars.
If you only shoot for good enough, then you'll probably land flat back here on earth.

Hugs,
TLC

Friday, January 15, 2010

Mermaid Handmade

My editor and I share an obsession fascination with the craft site Etsy.com (so many adorable things). What is particularly fun is hunting for handmade goodies relating to my books. (And you, my darling readers, benefit from this obsession fascination because most of the book-themed goodies I find will be used for a book-themed contest down the road.)

With mermaids, it's been a little tough. The classic image of the topless or coconut-bra-wearing mermaid just doesn't match up with the real mermaids who live in Thalassinia. Or any other mer kingdom, for that matter. Here are some of my favorites so far:


Mermaid Dog Collar

Mermaid Scales Glitter

Mermaid Kindle Case

Reef Maiden Hair Barrett

Mermaid Charm Pendant

Corgi Fish Stamp

Mermaid's Water Hair Comb

I'm pretty sure Daisy needs the dog collar. And if I had a Kindle I would totally order the Kindle cover.

Hugs,
TLC

Thursday, January 14, 2010

The Book of Buts and Ellipses....

Writing every book is different. Your process changes or you have to shake things up because the story is unique or you're just in a different mood when you write it. Sometimes, too, you get into writing ruts. I don't mean like writer's block--which I don't believe in--but more like a scratched record that keeps repeating itself. (If you don't know what happens when records get scratched, then this video might help.)

For me, I feel like I get into a different rut with each book. I can't remember them all--I've written a number of books, both finished and unfinished, that will never be published--but here are a few of the funny ones.
  • FINS2 (aka the book I just turned in) -- This seemed to be the book of BUTS and ELLIPSES. It feels like every sentence is either a two parter with a but in the middle (I'm no grammar queen, so I don't know what that kind of sentence structure is called) or an ellipsis somewhere along the line. There must have been at least one of the above on every single page. Possible reasons for this: 1. Lily is conflicted and can't decide what to do (or say), 2. I was conflicted and couldn't decide what my characters were doing, or 3. I was writing toward n ending that turned out to be wrong. Or, I suppose, I could have just been in love with buts and ellipses for a little while.
  • Oh. My. Gods. -- Definitely the book about RUNNING. And, while running is (obviously) a critical element of the plot, I would often find myself running--well, find Phoebe actually, because I don't run--with nothing else going on. I can't tell you how many scenes started off with Phoebe running or Phoebe and Griffin running where I had to say, "Something more than running has to happen in this scene." That's usually when I came up with my best plot twists.
  • Unpublished Chick Lit #2 -- This was the book that took place in ELEVATORS. As I wrote the first draft it felt like my characters were spending half their time in elevators. When I went back through to revise, there weren't nearly as many elevator scenes as I imagined. Such a relief because, really, how much action and conflict can happen in a tiny elevator?
  • Unpublished Romance #47 -- This was the book of HANDSHAKES. Every time anyone new entered the scene (literally and figuratively) or characters met each other for the first time someone just had to hold out a hand for a quick shake. I know that, in real life, this is probably accurate. But when you've got three dozen handshake in a four-hundred page book? That's a little over the top.
  • And, of course, I must say that all my books are almost always about EM-DASHES. It's my favorite punctuation mark. I use them so much, in fact, that my first copyeditor wrote, "The author seems exceedingly fond of em-dashes." True that.
Hmmm, I wonder what will be the run int the first book of the top secret trilogy--next up on my to write list.

Hugs,
TLC

Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Are You a Facebook Fan?

I don't mean are you a fan of Facebook, I mean are you a fan of moi and mes livres (my books) on Facebook? Well, you should be. Not because I'm all egotistical and think I should have legions of fans, but because there will be contests. In fact, I'll announce a contest right now.

When the Oh. My. Gods. series gets 100 fans, I will give away two hardcover (!) copies of winner's choice of Oh. My. Gods. or Goddess Boot Camp. When we get to 200 fans, I will give away three more. (That's five copies, five chances to win)

What can you do?
  • First of all, fan the series. You have to be a fan to win.
  • Second, tell your friends to join (real fans and readers of teen fiction only, please) so we get the required numbers.
(Oh, and if we reach a milestone without my knowledge, please message me to let me know.) Okay, now go become a fan, for Nike's sake. I want to give away some books!

Hugs,
TLC

PS. There are also fan pages for my authory self and Forgive My Fins. Fan those too while you're at it because there will be more contests in the future.

Monday, January 11, 2010

FINS2 Revision Playlist

Wonder what's playing on my iTunes as I plod through the revision on the sequel to Forgive My Fins (working titled Fins Are Forever)? I thought you'd never ask.
  • Closer to Love by Mat Kearney
  • Just Dance by Lady GaGa
  • Breakaway by Kelly Clarkson
  • Mercy by Duffy
  • I Write Sins Not Tragedies by Panic! At the Disco
  • Runaway Train by Soul Asylum
  • Sk8er Boi by Avril Lavigne
  • Love Story by Taylor Swift
  • Before He Cheats by Carrie Underwood
  • So What by P!nk
  • Single Ladies by Beyoncé
  • Little Sparrow by David Cook
  • Love Song by Sara Bareilles
  • Bleeding Love by Leona Lewis
  • Girlfriend by Avril Lavigne
  • Keep On Loving You by REO Speedwagon
  • Let's Hear It for the Boy by Deniece Williams
  • Hot N Cold by Katy Perry
  • I Love Rock 'N Roll by Joan Jett and The Blackhearts
  • The Climb by Miley Cyrus
Hugs,
TLC

Sunday, January 10, 2010

Highly Anticipated Books (2010 Edition)

As part of my New Year's resolution/goal to read 100 books in 2010, I'll do a lot of clearing the decks on my to-be-read pile. But there are also a bunch of books coming out this year that I won't be able to resist. (Read: will buy them as soon as they're available.)
  1. The Reckoning by Kelley Armstrong
  2. Heist Society by Ally Carter
  3. Only the Good Spy Young by Ally Carter
  4. The Cinderella Society by Kay Cassidy
  5. The Hunger Games: Book 3 by Suzanne Collins
  6. Will Grayson, Will Grayson by John Green and David Levithan
  7. The Alpha Bet by Stephanie Hale
  8. Hex Hall by Rachel Hawkins
  9. You Wish by Mandy Hubbard
  10. Scarlett Fever by Maureen Johnson
  11. Firelight by Sophie Jordan
  12. Gone by Lisa McMann
  13. Radiant Shadows by Melissa Marr
  14. The Ghosts Of Ashbury High by Jaclyn Moriarty
  15. Dark Flame by Alyson Noel
  16. Before I Fall by Lauren Oliver
  17. This World We Live In by Susan Beth Pfeffer
  18. Inside Out by Maria V. Snyder
  19. A Match Made in High School by Kristin Walker
  20. Forget-Her-Nots by Amy Brecount White
These are just some of my most anticipated books of the year (I'm sure I'm missing some). Are any of these on your list? Did I miss any big ones?

Hugs,
TLC

Friday, January 8, 2010

The 10 in ‘10 Teen Chick Lit Challenge!


Debut author Kay Cassidy (The Cinderella Society, Egmont, April 2010) and teen book blogger Jessica (Chick Lit Teens) are co-hosting the 10 in ‘10 Teen Chick Lit Challenge. The goal is to read ten teen chick lit book in 2010. (That's less than one per month! You can do that.)

All you have to do is grab the logo (above), choose your ten books, link to or comment your list on Kay's blog or Jessica's blog, and check in along the way. Easy. Fun. And there are prizes, too! And author chats. And more things, I'm sure, that I don't know about yet.

I'm using this challenge to motivate me to plow through some of the titles gathering dust on my neglected to-be-read pile. Here's my list:
  1. Zombie Queen of Newbury High by Amanda Ashby
  2. Airhead by Meg Cabot
  3. Cross My Heart and Hope to Spy by Ally Carter
  4. The ABC's of Kissing Boys by Tina Ferraro
  5. Temping Fate by Esther Friesner
  6. Spring Breakup by Stephanie Hale
  7. Prada & Prejudice by Mandy Hubbard
  8. 13 Little Blue Envelopes by Maureen Johnson
  9. How to Ditch Your Fairy by Justine Larbalestier
  10. TMI by Sarah Quigley
This will take care of ten percent of my New Year's resolution to read 100 books this year!

Plus, if you put Forgive My Fins on your list (or--sniff, sniff--even if you don't) I'll be one of the authors doing a live chat with the chick lit girls, so check Kay and Jessica's blogs regularly to find the schedule.

Hugs,
TLC

Thursday, January 7, 2010

The Obligatory Resolutions Post (2010 Edition)

I'm a few days late on this, but I guess that's kind of typical. We world class procrastinators occasionally miss our deadlines. But it's still the first week of the year, so I think I'm good.



In order to set my goals and resolutions for 2010, I need to take a look back at the ups and downs of 2009. To reflect on the ups and downs. I don't really want to focus on the negatives (and there were a few) so I'll just list the positives.

Ups
  • following my editor to her new job
  • selling five (5!) new books
  • winning the RITA
  • releasing Goddess Boot Camp
  • Oh. My. Gods. making the Georgia Peach list
  • Oh. My. Gods. making the Texas Tayshas
  • spending time with my best friend and her family
  • meeting lots of wonderful authors
  • touring Washington DC with my parents
  • participating in Living Your Five
  • doing my first ever paid school visit
  • getting Daisy
Wow. Turns out 2009 was better than I thought! I have a lot of things to be thankful for and happy about from the last twelve months. Of course, there are always things to improve. But how do I do that?

First, I'm going to take a tip from Ali Edwards and define the coming year in a single word. The idea is to think about what you want to happen in the coming year, what kind of changes you would like to see happen in your life. Then think of the one word that epitomizes what you want.

My word for 2010 is BALANCE.

Balance can mean a number of things, including mental steadiness and a state of equilibrium. I would like both of those, thank you. Mostly, I would like to move at a steadier pace, rather than coasting for a long time and then rushing at the last minute. I would like to write every single day, rather than let writing take over my entire life for weeks at a time when deadlines happen. I also want more balance between personal and professional, more balance in my diet, and more balance in my body.

It will take diligence and discipline, but it will be worth it in the end.

So, now that I've reflected on 2009 and identified my defining word for 2010, I need to state my specific goals for achieving said balance. To make the list manageable--and to give me a fighting chance of actually keeping the resolutions--I'm only going to state three career-related goals. Here goes.
  1. Write 20 pages every week. (This would result in 1000 pages this year. That's three or four books! And, at this point, I'm only contracted to write one.)
  2. Answer emails within a week. (Assuming I don't start getting a bajillion emails all of a sudden. I had started on this path in the Fall, but then I moved and everything went to hades.)
  3. Read 100 books. (After being shamed by Jen Lynn Barnes's 2009 total, which might be more than I've read in my entire life, I feel that I need to at least make a concerted effort.)
Next I need to figure out (and write down) the steps I have to take to achieve these goals. Like "write 3 pages first thing in the morning" so that getting my 30 pages is first priority. (Btw, not likely to happen. Am not a morning person.) Then it's just a matter of following those steps to success. And to a 2010 that's even better than its predecessor.

Anyone else have resolutions they want to share?

Hugs,
TLC

Tuesday, January 5, 2010

There Be Virgos

When I was in college I got one of those mini books at Barnes and Noble about Virgos (those born between August 23 and September 22). Before that I had always been a bit (a lot) skeptical about astrology. Stars and silk scarves and mysterious fortunetellers. But as I read through the lists of typical Virgo traits I was surprised. They all seemed completely dead on describing me.

Ever since I've been a bit of an enthusiast. I'm not super big on the daily horoscopes, although I get one in my email every day and every so often it is scarily accurate. I'm more interested in what a person's sign tells me about their personality. Here, for example, is the sweet side of the typical Virgo.


I think that most of these fit me. Especially the observant, analytical, and organized. Although, I must confess, I would never be caught alive in the outfit that cartoon Virgo is wearing. Gag.

For every sign, though, there are negatives, too. Virgo is no exception.


(also from Uncommon Goods)

Again, this is me. I am beyond overcritical (especially toward myself), I'm fussy, and am always worrying. I don't think I'm necessarily argumentative, but since I'm arguing that point.... Also, I'd be far more likely to wear this cartoon-y outfit. Girl's got some class.

The funny thing is, I am not the only Virgo author out there. Check out these authors who also fall under the sign of the virgin!
Sadly, I don't know much about other signs. My dad is a Taurus and my mom's a Scorpio, and my closest friends are Libras, Cancers, and Aquarius. In my search for Virgo authors, I also noted that there are a lot of Capricorns, whatever that means. If you know something significant about your sign, let me know. I'm always looking for ways to understand people.

I'm also not very educated about Chinese astrology. I know I'm a fire dragon (a very powerful and lucky sign--how awesome is that?!?) and that 2012 will be the year of the dragon. If the world ends in 2012, at least I'll have had a great year!

Hugs,
TLC

Sunday, January 3, 2010

Advent Calendar Contest Winner

The Forgive My Fins advent calendar contest closed at midnight Thursday. Yesterday, I finally selected a winner. (I would have posted the winner yesterday, but there was an issue with the new integrated blog and I spent most of the day fixing it. You'll note that the blog is now back at the blogspot address. Oh well.)

Anyway, here's how I selected the winner. First, I used brightly colored markers to write out the numbers one through twenty-nine (the number of entries) on little pieces of a paper.



Next, I folded the pieces (so I couldn't see the numbers) and put them in a pretty white bowl.



I dug around and finally pulled out the winning number.



Then I went to the list of entries and found number twenty-three. It belongs to:



Who guessed that, when Lily is finally going to tell Brody how she feels, then:



She'll be getting a fun mermaid prize pack that includes note cards, a DVD of Aquamarine, and a very sparkly mermaid necklace.



Congratulations! And thanks to everyone who entered. I enjoyed reading all of your wonderful guesses. (Some of them were very, very close to what actually happens!)

Didn't win this time? You can still enter the January contest on my website to win one of three signed copies of Oh. My. Gods.

Hugs,
TLC

Friday, January 1, 2010

New Year, New Website, New Contest

Happy 2010!

I have a feeling it's going to be an amazing year, so get ready. To kick it off right I've redesigned my website (again) with lots more fun pages and cool stuff to check out. You don't even have to go anywhere to check it out because this blog is now integrated into the site itself. Yay!

Among the other things I'm doing to make 2010 the best year yet are:
  • a monthly contest on the website (right now you can win a signed copy of Oh. My. Gods.)
  • occasional other contests on the blog
  • a very special contest coming in February
  • my first ever vlog series(!)
  • regular news updates on the home page
  • fun discussions on the Ning (join now so you don't miss out)
  • more new short stories
Whew! It's going to be a busy year. So what are you going to do to make 2010 your best year ever?


Hugs,
TLC